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Cyprus strategy has zero to do with Cyprus
I was really miffed when I first came here before starting my own Cyprus playthrough and the extent of the strategy is the same tried and tired strategies of simply relocating to an easier part of the world that could be employed by any number of OPMs in the world.
Seems like "relocation strategies" should have their own, generic page with individual countries reserved for strategies specific to them. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 18.104.22.168 (Talk) 22:08, 20 March 2015 (CET)
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