Talk:Burgundy

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B - This article is considered a B-class article on the wiki quality scale

Rewrite[edit]

Below is a description of rewrites, where the page has been tagged delete the comments not needed and add in any special instructions.

This page has been tagged as a {{Rewrite}}, the below issues have been found when the page is compared to the style guidelines

  1. Use of you/your: Please change to third person
  2. Prescriptive instructions: Make more generic
  3. Absence of links: Links missing or replaced by bold or italics which do not function
  4. Poor sectioning: Article should be broken up into easy to understand sections

Dauth (Talk) 21:16, 21 April 2016 (CEST)

Hello,
I have changed the first two item on the list, but I am not sure what you want for the third and fourth. Could you elaborate? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nwil10 (Talk) 23:06, 21 April 2016 (CEST)
The wiki works by using internal links to go to other pages. The strategy section current has none of these. I'll probably go through and add them soon since fixing the first two is more of a problem. The addition of subsections helps make the article readable, using tier 3 headers will create a subsection and allow better flow of the article. Dauth (talk) 09:44, 22 April 2016 (CEST)
I changed the wiki to include links and headers. Please let me know if anything else should be changed. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nwil10 (Talk) 19:03, 22 April 2016 (CET)
Looks fine now, thanks. Dauth (talk) 19:54, 22 April 2016 (CEST)

New rewrite[edit]

  1. Use of you/your: Please change to third person
  2. Absence of links: Links missing or replaced by bold or italics which do not function
  3. Poor sectioning: Article should be broken up into easy to understand sections

Only a small number of issues but they appear a lot. Dauth (talk) 12:11, 20 October 2018 (CEST)